When it was time to go back, we almost finished but we had one question to go. We had to go back to the auditorium. It was the end of the day and we had to leave. The leaders talked to use about what we were going to do the next day. So we said good-bye and the leaders gave us banners that had the mascot on it. The next day would be the fun day and the quiz bowl about what we learned at Fresno State.
    The next day was the fun day because we had the quiz bowl and after that we would go to the arcade and the bowling ally. When we arrived, we went to a different building because they were going to talk to us about how to be successful in college. When I went in the room, I couldn't believe who it was. It was Mr.Rizo, a guy who used to work at my school. I was glad to see him because he was a friend to me.

11/09/2012 9:52am

That must of been a good time an dyou did write a lot of it I hope you had a good time.

11/09/2012 9:53am

This was really good. Almost flawless. The only thing I saw, was there was no space in between Mr. and Rizo. Other than that, it was perfect!

11/09/2012 9:54am

good blogs don't forget to indent


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